Friday Fictioneers – In Between

PHOTO PROMPT – © Jennifer Pendergast

PHOTO PROMPT – © Jennifer Pendergast

They found his body.

Well, what was left of his body.

It’s mangled torso was all that remained of the old hobo who frequented the stoop at the end of the boxcar.

“He must have fallen.” The railroad official deduced. “We tell people all the time to stay off the cars.”

The reporter cleared his throat for attention. “But, Sir, these two cars have been locked into place here for over twenty years.”


This is written for Friday Fictioneers, a 100 word writing challenge presented weekly at:  Please, feel free to follow the link for more creative writing fun and festivities.


9 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – In Between

  1. Love the sentences at the beginning that build up the picture piece by piece.
    And all done in 73 words!!!
    I’m wondering if there’s a black market in trading extra words on Friday Fiction – I’m always throwing bits away to get to 100.


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